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"Just a little short of professional..."

Percussion IMO should not stop completely at :29 and 1:12... leave like a quarter note hi-hat or something.

I agree with Chron on maybe diversifying... at 1:45 a guitar solo would be much appreciated. The beginning and ending however, I feel are effectively simple.

Just a little short of professional... needs vocals, which I may or may not provide. :) Depends on how crappy I sound.

pitbulljones responds:

Hey G9, Maybe you're right with regads to percussion, a ratatat would have worked pretty well, but I do prefer it with gaps, especially early on. haha yea, 1.45 does suit a guityar solo, im in total agreement, I aint a fret wanker, i can riff away but solos aint a massive thing of mine, then again I only need 20 seonds worth a most...hmmm good spot.

Hey bang vocals on all you want, if you work in cubase I'll send you the project files.

thanks for the review.

pitters

"...who ever said vintage isn't cool?"

As said by Chron, "this song is begging for vocals tho - some nice brit vocals". You should really collaborate with a vocalist (or maybe train up in your own vocals, never heard you sing) and ultimately complete this song by adding the human voice. Pretty vintage, but who ever said vintage isn't cool? Great percussion, nice guitar melodies... a more dominant bass would have added some more depth to the scene. Chron's comments about the harshness of the guitar are greatest in truth in and around 2:40. Some tone tweaks should make it sound a lot more relaxed, as said.

pitbulljones responds:

Vocals are on their way G9, just a matter of time thats all. Vintage is indeed cool my friend. I know that bass needs sporting i might have to hunt some decent monitors down when i get paid so i can mix it right. right 2:40 duly noted. Thanks for the review mate.

"...a deviation and preservation fused together"

From beginning to end, your old style still remains, in subtle doses. Beautiful relaxing piano... diverse composition. Images of long past childhood, all painted in colors of intense light and golden bronze, appear. The guitar line is also interesting, and all in all this is a deviation and preservation fused together.

pitbulljones responds:

'a deviation and a preservation' i like that. Like i keep saying this tune came from nowhere tbh, sometimes you just roll with it. haha the imagery again, cool.

Thanks very much mate

pitters

Wonderful ambiance preceding impending violence.

Europe in the Middle Ages. Morning has dawned, and a vassal lays siege to his lord's stronghold. The mist is still thick as chain-mailed infantry run errands and the necessary preparations. Trebuchets and various siege equipment are being set up, with mounted knights shouting the orders of their lord. As the electronic instrument barges in mid-track, the images of medieval Europe begin to grow staticky and are slowly replaced by images of modern destruction and combat. What can I say? Wonderful ambiance preceding impending violence. You've deviated from your old style, I can tell.

pitbulljones responds:

haha, i like the imagery mate, very nice indeed. Im seriously just gonna get you to write reviews for every soing on my mysace or summat. It's always nice when people get images from songs, whatever the song is, it means it's created an atmosphere

cheers

pitters

"...a bit incoherent..."

The piano part was a bit incoherent, and the percussion didn't really fit... the cymbal was a bit annoying... I don't know, overall the notes sound a bit random, and the instruments don't fit together. Buy a theory book, it'll help a bit with the notation/composition process.

HiniberusDelius responds:

I'm going to work on the music when I can during summer, I do not have much free time for now as I have the big exams. I mean I'll try to make Degraded soul better (Smooth out the randomness) But I'm still new to the whole music thing.

"That was random as hell..."

That was random as hell, but the little bits and pieces by themselves were nice. Good work.

HiniberusDelius responds:

Okay thanks, this seems to be the best track I got so far (and it was my 2nd one ever), I'll keep to industrial section as it's my speciality if you wish I'll keep you updated for my next release.

"...practice makes perfect."

It seems like you're beginning... but I guess I can say that's a good start. Perhaps a catchier melody, and as always, practice makes perfect.

HiniberusDelius responds:

Well thanks

"...I just can't hum along here."

This is a little too experimental for me. Not much else to say, there needs to be a set melody, and I just can't hum along here.

HiniberusDelius responds:

I intensionally wanted to see how I could use riffs and from all of the other comments I gusse I used them quite well. It's your opinion and it was ment to be a bit random though.

"...on its way to the Nintendo music board..."

Jesus christ. This sounds like something straight out of a Mario game... the melody sounds so familiar, yet I don't recognize it. Where'd you get it? But I'm pretty sure it's not a remix... can't be certain. However, you made the perfect choice of instruments. This track is on its way to the Nintendo board, for sure.

Father-of-Death responds:

ha ha ha WTF!

I'm in band and we played this one song called "Yakity Sax" and i loved it!!!

So i thought I would make a remix of it.

and bada bing bada boom done!

does actually remind me of popcorn being popped

What VST's do you use, man? I need to get some of those... the ARP's, etc... are great, and you've arranged them into a catchy melody. The poppy-sounding electronic instrument does actually remind me of popcorn being popped... great work with the track man.

Father-of-Death responds:

Woot!!!

I use Vanguard

Thnx for the review again!!!! =D

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